well this is a poem which i really really liked when i wrote it down in the middle of studying bloody reform movements .

i never told you i how much loved you
i thought it wouldnt matter
i thought you'd have known
but well it doesnt matter

thursday night i was thinking in the dark
i was thinking till the day went dark
when someone met me and deeply broke my heart
but thats why

i dont wanna be
i dont wanna be
wherever you go
wherever you are
whatever you do..

you just take my heart away!

i thought loving you was what i needed
you were all i cared for
but some thing in my heart
told me i should leave you

i never told you how much i loved you
i thought it wouldnt matter
i thought you'd have known but now it doesnt matter
and thats why

i dont wanna be
i dont wanaa be
wherever you went
wherever you were
whatever you did

it took my life away...

-
Dhruv Raj| Sunday, June 19, 2005
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19 Comments:

hey dhruv.. excellnt wrk.. strght frm hrt... bravo

By  Abhishek Jain, at Monday, June 20, 2005 10:29:00 AM  

fanks man
tuks

By  Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 10:57:00 AM  

tuks srly i mn it i cudnt make a or tail of dis poem- no offence mntcoz i no u guyz just need a chane ti brk me nek,,.........lol. just jokin btw still ans me Q wat is dis poem

By  vipul, at Monday, June 20, 2005 5:01:00 PM  

b4 readin dis poem...i dint read whom was it bi...n tuk it for granted tht it was bi sui...trust me midway of the poem...i was abt 2 faint thinkin tht sui had riten it....was imposible 2 believe...but den red tht it was bi tukz....lol....amazin wrk... luv srsly means a lot 2 u...keep up da gud wrk,....

By  Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 8:31:00 PM  

It sux applause applause..

By  Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 9:00:00 PM  

who stole my line now??? eh? ne1?

By  Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 10:24:00 AM  

and vipul...this as gyani said is straight from the heart...so its jus a garbled mess, it wontmake sense to u

By  Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 10:25:00 AM  

hehe...i guessed

By  Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 9:05:00 PM  

i was scared for a moment wen i red applause...

By  Hemantika Verma, at Wednesday, June 22, 2005 2:04:00 PM  

its nice 2 no....keep guessin wat

By  vipul, at Wednesday, June 22, 2005 3:03:00 PM  

i was scared....coz i srsly dint want dis 2 strt agn

By  Hemantika Verma, at Thursday, June 23, 2005 1:18:00 PM  

very frankly i dont give a damn abt wat's nice to noe vipul...

By  Dhruv Raj, at Thursday, June 23, 2005 5:52:00 PM  

ahaan ahaan ahan ahan

By  Dhruv Raj, at Friday, June 24, 2005 12:01:00 PM  

HEY
wot did dat suppose to mean ahaan??

By  Anonymous, at Friday, June 24, 2005 9:08:00 PM  

beyond u woman...chuck it...

By  Anonymous, at Saturday, June 25, 2005 9:19:00 PM  

HA HA HA HA!!

By  Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 12:32:00 PM  

asshole......

By  Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 8:45:00 PM  

whad i say whadd i say? eh?

By  Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 9:38:00 PM  

uh u noe i wrote this poem for the critics it is not an empty poem

By  Dhruv Raj, at Thursday, June 30, 2005 9:58:00 PM  

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