sorry guys.....another of my poems...u r probably sick of them by now....but this is the best place i feel to put up my poems ......n plzz dont just say " this is great"....seriously say what u think abt it....

RAIN DROPS

The weather turns bad...
Dark n cloudy
The way u feel when sad
Or just not too happy

But just then, the rain starts
Joy wets the earth
Happiness fills all hearts
The world has a rebirth!

Nature too, tells u the same
Through night n day
Sunshine n rain
Nothing ever remains the same

Happy one second
With a purpose n aim
Lost the next
N don’t know what or who to blame

Life’s like that
Like hills n plains
Too rough or smooth
Differs from one to other terrain

Live life to the full
Experience all-joy n pain
Remember to be sad too
If after all just humane

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Anonymous| Thursday, June 02, 2005
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12 Comments:

hey sui....was a poem requirin a lot of thot wrk...seriousl y was amazin...i had 2 read twice 2 understand and thts da sign of a gud poem....!!!

By  Hemantika Verma, at Tuesday, June 07, 2005 1:40:00 PM  

hey thnx..............but are u sure reading it twice means a good poem.it might mean a nonsense poem too...........lol.......anyways writing a poem doesnt require too much thinking if u r in the mood......coz it comes naturally to u to write down at that time.but if not in the mood then it seems impossible

By  Unknown, at Tuesday, June 07, 2005 7:18:00 PM  

this DEFINETLY sux...haha...okay its...thik thak

p.s. i didnt read it

By  Dhruv Raj, at Friday, June 10, 2005 4:12:00 PM  

okie.thnks anyways....
p.s.- had u read it u wont have said its thik thak.......u would have stuck by saying it sux.......lol

By  Unknown, at Friday, June 10, 2005 7:52:00 PM  

i completely agree wid u ........
ps now keep guessin wid whom i agree

By  vipul, at Saturday, June 11, 2005 9:30:00 AM  

okay...thats tuff (hahahahaha)

By  Dhruv Raj, at Saturday, June 11, 2005 2:24:00 PM  

hey shubhra its ok....no probs..n yea...my msn id is -suhanibahl@hotmail.com

By  Unknown, at Monday, June 13, 2005 6:46:00 AM  

suhani--raindrops are definitely sexy...hitting your skin...splashing...rolling down....good poem......

By  SavRed, at Monday, June 13, 2005 7:20:00 AM  

thnks charles.....who r u?....a/s/l?

By  Unknown, at Monday, June 13, 2005 11:40:00 PM  

sexy raindrops???????????? idiot its only water

By  Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 14, 2005 4:20:00 PM  

use ur imagination dhruv!!!!!.....dont think abt sexy ranidrops fine....but dont temme u dont love rain n that it doesnt make u happy??!!!

By  Unknown, at Tuesday, June 14, 2005 10:13:00 PM  

well i actually adore rain...i mean i like the pattern the wind makes wid the rain..the swish ans swash of nature...u certainly got me going

By  Dhruv Raj, at Wednesday, June 15, 2005 9:47:00 PM  

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