friendships in fairy land!!

Sunday, June 19, 2005

Something sweet when deeply thought about pleases the heart.

well this is a poem which i really really liked when i wrote it down in the middle of studying bloody reform movements .

i never told you i how much loved you
i thought it wouldnt matter
i thought you'd have known
but well it doesnt matter

thursday night i was thinking in the dark
i was thinking till the day went dark
when someone met me and deeply broke my heart
but thats why

i dont wanna be
i dont wanna be
wherever you go
wherever you are
whatever you do..

you just take my heart away!

i thought loving you was what i needed
you were all i cared for
but some thing in my heart
told me i should leave you

i never told you how much i loved you
i thought it wouldnt matter
i thought you'd have known but now it doesnt matter
and thats why

i dont wanna be
i dont wanaa be
wherever you went
wherever you were
whatever you did

it took my life away...

-
Dhruv Raj| Sunday, June 19, 2005
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19 Comments:

hey dhruv.. excellnt wrk.. strght frm hrt... bravo

By Abhishek Jain, at Monday, June 20, 2005 10:29:00 AM

fanks man
tuks

By Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 10:57:00 AM

tuks srly i mn it i cudnt make a or tail of dis poem- no offence mntcoz i no u guyz just need a chane ti brk me nek,,.........lol. just jokin btw still ans me Q wat is dis poem

By vipul, at Monday, June 20, 2005 5:01:00 PM

b4 readin dis poem...i dint read whom was it bi...n tuk it for granted tht it was bi sui...trust me midway of the poem...i was abt 2 faint thinkin tht sui had riten it....was imposible 2 believe...but den red tht it was bi tukz....lol....amazin wrk... luv srsly means a lot 2 u...keep up da gud wrk,....

By Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 8:31:00 PM

It sux applause applause..

By Anonymous, at Monday, June 20, 2005 9:00:00 PM

who stole my line now??? eh? ne1?

By Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 10:24:00 AM

and vipul...this as gyani said is straight from the heart...so its jus a garbled mess, it wontmake sense to u

By Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 10:25:00 AM

hehe...i guessed

By Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 21, 2005 9:05:00 PM

i was scared for a moment wen i red applause...

By Hemantika Verma, at Wednesday, June 22, 2005 2:04:00 PM

its nice 2 no....keep guessin wat

By vipul, at Wednesday, June 22, 2005 3:03:00 PM

i was scared....coz i srsly dint want dis 2 strt agn

By Hemantika Verma, at Thursday, June 23, 2005 1:18:00 PM

very frankly i dont give a damn abt wat's nice to noe vipul...

By Dhruv Raj, at Thursday, June 23, 2005 5:52:00 PM

ahaan ahaan ahan ahan

By Dhruv Raj, at Friday, June 24, 2005 12:01:00 PM

HEY
wot did dat suppose to mean ahaan??

By Anonymous, at Friday, June 24, 2005 9:08:00 PM

beyond u woman...chuck it...

By Anonymous, at Saturday, June 25, 2005 9:19:00 PM

HA HA HA HA!!

By Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 12:32:00 PM

asshole......

By Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 8:45:00 PM

whad i say whadd i say? eh?

By Anonymous, at Sunday, June 26, 2005 9:38:00 PM

uh u noe i wrote this poem for the critics it is not an empty poem

By Dhruv Raj, at Thursday, June 30, 2005 9:58:00 PM

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By Dhruv Raj, at Thursday, June 16, 2005 6:28:00 PM

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By vipul, at Thursday, June 16, 2005 8:47:00 PM

maan wat a awesome reply....as sum1 says a political type of reply .....lol

By vipul, at Thursday, June 16, 2005 8:49:00 PM

12 Comments:

hey sui....was a poem requirin a lot of thot wrk...seriousl y was amazin...i had 2 read twice 2 understand and thts da sign of a gud poem....!!!

By Hemantika Verma, at Tuesday, June 07, 2005 1:40:00 PM

hey thnx..............but are u sure reading it twice means a good poem.it might mean a nonsense poem too...........lol.......anyways writing a poem doesnt require too much thinking if u r in the mood......coz it comes naturally to u to write down at that time.but if not in the mood then it seems impossible

By Unknown, at Tuesday, June 07, 2005 7:18:00 PM

this DEFINETLY sux...haha...okay its...thik thak

p.s. i didnt read it

By Dhruv Raj, at Friday, June 10, 2005 4:12:00 PM

okie.thnks anyways....
p.s.- had u read it u wont have said its thik thak.......u would have stuck by saying it sux.......lol

By Unknown, at Friday, June 10, 2005 7:52:00 PM

i completely agree wid u ........
ps now keep guessin wid whom i agree

By vipul, at Saturday, June 11, 2005 9:30:00 AM

okay...thats tuff (hahahahaha)

By Dhruv Raj, at Saturday, June 11, 2005 2:24:00 PM

hey shubhra its ok....no probs..n yea...my msn id is -suhanibahl@hotmail.com

By Unknown, at Monday, June 13, 2005 6:46:00 AM

suhani--raindrops are definitely sexy...hitting your skin...splashing...rolling down....good poem......

By SavRed, at Monday, June 13, 2005 7:20:00 AM

thnks charles.....who r u?....a/s/l?

By Unknown, at Monday, June 13, 2005 11:40:00 PM

sexy raindrops???????????? idiot its only water

By Dhruv Raj, at Tuesday, June 14, 2005 4:20:00 PM

use ur imagination dhruv!!!!!.....dont think abt sexy ranidrops fine....but dont temme u dont love rain n that it doesnt make u happy??!!!

By Unknown, at Tuesday, June 14, 2005 10:13:00 PM

well i actually adore rain...i mean i like the pattern the wind makes wid the rain..the swish ans swash of nature...u certainly got me going

By Dhruv Raj, at Wednesday, June 15, 2005 9:47:00 PM