you noe lately this hype about COPYING love poems and poems on frndship poems has drivin me fukin mad....sry for the abuse but its that bad....now to the dunder heads huu havta b taught a lesson!!.....guyz and gals....except fr u su coz an original piece no matter how bad it is always out does the one huu thinks he can take a short cut and copy someone's work......u see the context the riter penned down that poem mite b completely diff than wat u r thinkin.....plus its sikening to read them....i mean i puke....if u are actually feelin sumthn about ur friends or ur lover ten u wil hav no prob in scribbling a poem down...for eg i thot of this while swimming and i loved it...
its like....

i'll love u till the sun stops shining
i'll love u till the sea stops flowing
i'll love u till u die
and then i'lll cry
ill pray to god
i had done my job
i know he'll pity me
but then love is eternal
she will always be there in my heart
in my mind and in my soul
and that will help me all thro out my life
even wen i am stabbed by a knife
my heart will never die
and nor will hers.

so hows that????

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Dhruv Raj| Friday, April 08, 2005
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8 Comments:

thats a very very beautiful poem......n the most beautiful part of it was its simplicity.......its explains someone's{ur probably} love for the other in such simple words that it touches ur heart{atleast it did mine}....i've always loved that quote " beauty lies in simlicity" n this is the best eg. of it

By  Unknown, at Friday, April 08, 2005 8:05:00 PM  

hey nice one maan...n thanx for mentionin me ova der .........

By  vipul, at Friday, April 08, 2005 8:28:00 PM  

hey tuks...uv til an extent made me realize tht yes actual beauty IS in ur owm wrk..but if u cum across smth which realy describes wat ur feelin ...den i dont think its any harm in putin tht acros...but ya...it does luk nice 2 read wrks of ur frenz....n dis one uv riten....was like unbelivable!!!!! i neva thot u cud b ssssssssssssssssooooooooooooo emotional...

By  Hemantika Verma, at Saturday, April 09, 2005 1:54:00 PM  

well what?? i would love to hear u complete the sentence!!!!

By  Unknown, at Saturday, April 09, 2005 5:02:00 PM  

I love it!
Jhanvi

By  Anonymous, at Thursday, April 14, 2005 5:37:00 PM  

hey hi jhanvi..........who r u?

By  Unknown, at Saturday, April 16, 2005 1:56:00 PM  

i am his number one fan.....
jhanvi

By  Anonymous, at Saturday, April 16, 2005 7:30:00 PM  

i think u rock!!!!
wanna meet???
Jhanvi

By  Anonymous, at Monday, April 18, 2005 10:50:00 PM  

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