hey guys
yesterday smthn happened to me n i was in a pretty philosophical mood....thats not it......i was soo philosophical that i wrote a poem!!!! even i was surprised at myself.......but all the same....here it is.....
people weave in n out of this path of ours called life
theres ur family-
who are there forever, whether u like it or not
n then there are some,
whom u would prefer were rather not!
finally there are ur frnz...
ur hand picked lot.

they all come into our lives for a reason, season, or a lifetime.
in my life, i miss those there for a season
thank those there for a reason
n love those there for a lifetime

all of them leave footprints in the sands of our hearts
if not deep hard imprints made there for life
each of them has contributed to my life
made me some how, somewhere, somewhat wise
whether they were friends with suggestions
or enemies or teachers with lessons

they all together have made me who i am
n who i am is pretty awesome!

THANK YOU EVERYONE!!!!!!!

there............was a bit hesitant....coz it sounds pretty stupid........but then agn.....its my first attempt.......my first creative writing {except those in school n those on bday cards!!}........anyways........lemme know how funny/ stupid/nice ...etc, u find it.

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Anonymous| Sunday, April 03, 2005
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6 Comments:

a nice little 'tribute' to those ppl who have made a little contribution in ur life....well it does sound good.....n hell ya our enemies r da ppl who make bring out da best in us...isnt it..?? especially in a situation wer u cant let da oder person get da b8er outta u .....

By  vipul, at Sunday, April 03, 2005 5:53:00 PM  

hey sui...that was an AMAZIN bit of creativity...seriously...i always felt tht u did have a creative mind in u...n u have bought it out now...do carry on wid it...n ofcourse we all know...wen smth is done (in dis case riten)...wid true feelinz in it...it ALWAYS cumz out well...n u v given us da proof....n ya wat vipul sed abt enemies is also absolutely corect n true....

By  Hemantika Verma, at Wednesday, April 06, 2005 6:03:00 PM  

hey thnx guys..........i do intend to continue writing,.......since i always had ideas before...but never actually penned them down....but think i might now.....

By  Unknown, at Wednesday, April 06, 2005 8:09:00 PM  

great poem man...
i guess my influence! hahaha
joking...that was great.....u no wat i liked...it wasnt sm philosphical wierd thing it actually made sense

By  Shubhi, at Wednesday, April 06, 2005 8:28:00 PM  

it is a ma zi ng, trust me, i wld hav been the last person to sumthn good about a poem specially about frndship!!....but this is an exhilirating piece of poetry....i really feel that this came from the heart and it speaks for everyone out there....buh its so beautifully crafted that i hesitantly havta ask...is it original???

By  Dhruv Raj, at Friday, April 08, 2005 5:37:00 PM  

yup......its absolutely original......got the idea n wrote it all while sitting on my hammock{ my fav place in the world !!!!!}though i would admit i just took the idea of reason season lifetime from a mail.............rest every word is mine!

By  Unknown, at Friday, April 08, 2005 8:09:00 PM  

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